Peer Comments

Street Furniture

Amy Leedham
Well Miss Leedham, this is a very nicely thought through design that is incredibly rendered. I love the posters and the design details poster. It is a very good interactive design that can be placed in multiple areas. All in all well done!!


Gizem Kurangil
I really like your tech drawings and how they are laid out. Your concept is a really cool idea, but how would it power itself when its not being swung on. Overall a really well presented design.


Felicia Sutandatz
I thought your model was amazing, really organic and well presented. I really want to know how big it is tho, and how it is used by a wheelchair, which you mentioned. Well done on a really nice design!


Bryce Beard
This is an awesome design, I love the curves and the organic form. It is an awesome integration of the seat and bench unit, with easy installation and perfectly chosen material. This is a really curvaceous design that truly represents the street furniture brief.  


Joshua Flowers
This is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ho Wow!! this is an amazing model and an incredibly well rendered design. Congrats! You have truly showed how awesome your design process it and your final concept all done in a weel. 





Green Gifting

Kazim Khimji
Well done, this is an awesome flatpack product that is well thought through. Both the assembly and the use of the warm light builds an emotional connection to this light. This product is an awesome green gift and the materials further highlight this. Your sketches are amazing and have heaps of energy. Well done and keep it up.


Amy Leedham
Your fruit bowl design is incredibly intricate. The use of woven and moulded waste plastic is a very smart idea that completely satisfies the 'green gift' project aim. Your exploration of form and use of materials worked well and achieved a very nice product. I can absolutely see this gift in the homes of many people, with the juxtaposition of organic shape with industrial waste working well. 


Anuj K Dhawan
As I said yesterday... Trust.
Once again you have created an incredibly well designed 'green gift' that is the final product of multiple concepts and explorations. This is a gift that is well thought through and absolutely satisfies the 'green gift' brief. I can totally see this becoming a huge hit on the market. I love the layout of your posters and the final product. Incredible job boss!!!


Anahita J Fard
This product is a very intriguing teacup. The use of waste cork and glass in a product like this is very smart. Not only does it look awesome but I can see people using this. I can see it referencing the hug mug at Max Brenner, which is also a very interactive experience because of the warmth the mug radiates. All in all an awesome green gift. Well done!!


Felicia Sutandatz
The seeded paper bouquet highlights the evolution that is involved in designing a 'green gift'. The use of seeded paper is incredibly well done and is a very logical concept. When I was researching seeded paper, people did use a blender which would make the squares of newspaper smaller and possibly improve the already amazing aesthetics (not sure if that is the second image or not). All in all, an amazing green gift that I can totally see florists adopting for flowers. 





Social Packaging

Anuj K Dhawan
Well Sir, This is an incredibly smart idea. My favourite part of your Bottle design was your model as it is just incredible; I am impressed. I must agree with Josh about the yellow/brown background but unless he said that I would have had no idea how to fix it haha. All in all your presentation was clean that truly portrayed your product. Well done!!!


Luke Messina

I think that your layout and design rationale is very nice. It shows everything that is needed and your huge amount of work. I do however, believe that if the drawings done on the "Explanation of the Design" page were just illustrator drawings they would be nicer, i don't believe they need the background image. All in all, an awesome rationale for a needed product. Well done!


Mathew Holihan

I really like your design and rationale. The use of illustrator images throughout your rationale is well thought through and I like its use to explain things. well done. Your design is very logical and i do like its reference from the square. I do believe this product would be able to aid people in opening medication. 


Steven Hermawan

I do agree with you on your packaging solution for current chip packaging. I cant see how this is a social issue tho, but it is definitely an environmental issue. The stacking of the product would not only allow for effective transportation but would allow for the chips to not be crushed. I like your final model, overall you have produced an awesome product and rationale. Well done.


Constance Docos
What an awesome idea!!! I think that you have done an awesome job that completely covers the brief and totally agree that you should be putting this forward for the packaging awards. Well done with your rationale and the final model!

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